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“Naming Conventions”

You drive a yellow sedan, the color
too loud to be yours.  You take me
into town, greet your favorite establishments
as we pass: Hello, Taco Stand.  Hello, Bookstore.

In the passenger seat I tip my head,
press my face against the window.  The stars
speckle the sky like a dessert in which
I must partake. I point out my favorites:

There is Cassiopeia, there’s Orion and
his dog.  But to you the stars are random
like grains of sand left on the street
when the ice melts in the spring.  

But here is how the dirt is different:
it will disappear in time, blow down
the road, be swept away.  The stars, though,
have died, long before anyone saw them at all.
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~caveatLECTOR:iconcaveatLECTOR: Apr 25, 2008, 6:49:21 PM
seriously hot shit.

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<smoking-mirrors>I love a guy who can make me groan.
<jake10684>but after a week or so, it's like fisting a jar of mayonnaise.
<Bringa>although lesbian incest sounds good too.
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 25, 2008, 10:13:14 PM Mood: Joy
differently indeed....
*b1gfan:iconb1gfan: Apr 25, 2008, 10:15:15 PM
Hey, you hate mongering tart...(!) .. what's NaPo stand for?...Is that a National Poetry Month thingie?
`PinkyMcCoversong:iconPinkyMcCoversong: Apr 26, 2008, 11:14:46 AM
But....I hated it! I love you!

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< GunShyMartyr > PinkyMcCoversong: o hi asl plz
< PinkyMcCoversong > GunShyMartyr: ask again in a cockney accent
< GunShyMartyr > ELLO daaaahling, what's yah name then. giveus a kiss would ya love? yer eighteen roite?
`PinkyMcCoversong:iconPinkyMcCoversong: Apr 26, 2008, 11:16:21 AM
National Poetry Writing Month - writing a poetry a day for the whole month of April!!

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< GunShyMartyr > PinkyMcCoversong: o hi asl plz
< PinkyMcCoversong > GunShyMartyr: ask again in a cockney accent
< GunShyMartyr > ELLO daaaahling, what's yah name then. giveus a kiss would ya love? yer eighteen roite?
~LesCheveux:iconLesCheveux: May 12, 2008, 7:46:39 PM
srs hot shit, yes

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
`PinkyMcCoversong:iconPinkyMcCoversong: May 13, 2008, 8:54:58 PM
awww :D

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< GunShyMartyr > PinkyMcCoversong: o hi asl plz
< PinkyMcCoversong > GunShyMartyr: ask again in a cockney accent
< GunShyMartyr > ELLO daaaahling, what's yah name then. giveus a kiss would ya love? yer eighteen roite?